Script has changed - "Loveholic"

CHARACTERS:
1. Tree(Boy)
2. Sky(Girl)

SETTING:
An Kitchen

GENRE:
Drama

Concept
One girl who is a workaholic has been missing important thing in her life. Tree helps her to find what is an important thin in her life. (This animation was inspired by a song “Always on My Mind” )

INT. A kitchen

Very quite Sunday morning, Tree makes a cake.  He jumps up after hearing Sky’s shouting. He goes towards Sky’s room.
Sky:
Oh! No!
Tree:
What’s wrong?
Sky :
I’m late. (from outside Kitchen)
Sky :
Don’t worry! Honey! Today is Sunday~~(soft voice) , and Today is ~~ (She stops for him to speak)
Tree:
(on the phone) Hi! I’m sorry. I’m late, yep, I’ll be right there in 10mins. Bye (Hang up the phone) Sorry, what did you say?
Tree:
Do you know what day it is today?
Sky:
Yes, you said today is Sunday, 24th of January. Also, I have a presentation on the 26th of January. It’s very important. And I am late! I have to go now!! I’ll be late. Bye! By the way~~ Nice Cake!

Tree: Bye~
Sky: (she stops) Tree~, would you like to go for a walk with Joy and me after we have cake? (Soft voice)



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The reson of changes :
1. over 30seconds
2. When i asked friends to record their voice, the scrpit is not enough to act.

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New Script

CHARACTERS:
1. Tree(Boy)
2. Sky(Girl)


INT. A kitchen
Very quite Sunday morning, Tree makes a cake. (Today is Sky & Tree’s one year wedding celebrating day. She is slepping in her room.) He jumps up after hearing Sky’s shouting.

Sky:
Oh! No!
Tree:
What’s wrong?
Sky :
I’m late. (from outside Kitchen)
Tree :
Don’t worry! Honey! Today is Sunday~~(soft voice) , and Today is ~~ (Sky stops for him to speak)
Sky:
(on the phone) Hi! I’m sorry. I’m late, yep, I’ll be right there in 10mins. (Hang up the phone) Sorry, what did you say?
Tree:
Do you know what day it is today?
Sky:
Yes, you said today is Sunday, 24th of January. Also, I have a presentation on the 26th of January. It’s very important. And I am late! I have to go now!! I’ll be late. Bye! By the way~~ Nice Cake!
Tree:Bye

(Remove) Last part

Name: Tree
(When you look at a tree, it is always same location.
can't move anywhere. however, it is growing up, give people wide shadow, protect from wind.
This character is same as tree for Sky)

Personality : Quiet, Gentle manner, Warm heart.

Color : Tree colours comes from Tree
Warm colour.

Sky- Girl Character analyse

Name : Sky
(Cloud sky, sunny sky, There are various character of sky. Sky character starts from here)


Personality : Workingholic, always busy. high self-esteem

Her red-cloth represents her high self-esteem.

I planned she is quite busy person, her hair is moving all the time.(Too hard,so next time)

Animate

This animation is other subject for assignment i've made this semester. 
However, i have been influenced by 2123GFS course,
This course helps me to develop this assignment a lot.


For instance, Fanning and camera Focus on and out
Timing, etc

Developing my storyboard 1

Background -
When i made a storyboard for 30seconds,
I had 3 place backgroud - on the street, living room, Kitchen
the story of animation was jumping on everywhere, not story was smooth.
Now, make a simple
one place - kitchen (although 3 background)

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Mirror Scence : represent sky(girl)'s strong self-esteem
also, she falls under narcissism.
She doesn't understand what it is important in her life.

I have deleted the mirror scene this time
It would be so complicated to animate in a short time

More details about girl character analyse - next post

Tree character is developing

My character has been developed using more lines.

Animation Run Cycle